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The Weekly Text, 25 August 2023: Styling Sentences Lesson 5, Dependent Clauses in a Pair or in a Series (at the Beginning or End of a Sentence)

It’s Friday again, and the school year starts soon. Let’s continue with fifth lesson plan in the Styling Sentences unit, this one on dealing with dependent clauses in a pair or a series at the beginning or end of a sentence.

This lesson opens with this Cultural Literacy worksheet on the direct object of the verb. You know, that thing that a transitive verb requires to complete its meaning: Omar buys a cup of coffee at the bodega every morning. And here is the worksheet with explanatory and mentor texts to guide students through developing their understanding of this relatively complicated sentence form.

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The Weekly Text, 18 August 2023: Styling Sentences Lesson 4, An Internal Series of Appositives or Modifiers (Enclosed by a Pair of Dashes or Parentheses) with an Excursus on the Dash and the Parentheses

Here is the fourth lesson plan of the Styling Sentences Unit. This one, as the header on this post indicates, deals with an internal series of appositives or modifiers enclosed by a pair of dashes and parentheses.

This lesson opens with this worksheet on parsing sentences to find the adjectives in each clause. And here is the worksheet with explanatory and mentor texts–the former, of course, the excursus on the use of dashes and parentheses. This worksheet contains no modified cloze  exercises or other supported materials, only mentor texts which students will use to draft their own prose using this relatively complicated sentence structure. Obviously, such supported work is possible here, but it will require a lot of thought and careful composition and editing.

Your thoughts?

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The Weekly Text, 11 August 2023: Styling Sentences Lesson 3, An Introductory Series of Appositives (with a Dash and a Summarizing Subject) with an Excursus on Appositive Nouns

Here is the third lesson of the Styling Sentences Unit. This one, as the header indicates, prescribes a sentence structure with an introductory series of appositives (with a dash and a summarizing subject) that includes an excursus on appositive nouns.

I open this lesson with this parsing sentences worksheet for nouns, which, as it sounds, calls upon students to parse a series of sentences to find the nouns in them. Finally, here is the worksheet with explanatory and mentor texts that is the primary work of this lesson. Once again, there are no modified cloze exercises on this worksheets; rather, there are mentor texts, sentences in the form the lesson seeks to help students learn to write. Unlike other lessons in this unit, I am still less than certain how I might go about developing some structured practice for sentence structures this complicated.

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The Weekly Text, 4 August 2023: Styling Sentences Lesson 2, A Series with a Variation with an Excursus on the Conjunction And.

Another week has passed, so it’s time for this week’s Text, which is the second lesson of the Styling Sentences Unit, this one, as above, on a sentence structure that includes a series with a variation, with an excursus on using the conjunction and.

I begin this lesson with this Cultural Literacy worksheet on the Latinism non sequitur. It means, as the text of the document begins,  “A thought that does not logically follow what has just been said.” It’s probably a concept and practice students should know before they set off on writing long, complicated declarative sentences. Finally, here is the worksheet with mentor texts that is the work of this lesson. There are no modified cloze exercises in this document; students work from the mentor texts to produce their own sentences in the form displayed.

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The Weekly Text, 28 July 2023: Styling Sentences Lesson 1, A Series without a Conjunction with an Excursus on the Colon, Lists, and the Serial Comma

This week’s Text is a the first lesson of fifteen in the Styling Sentences unit, this one on a series without a conjunction with an excursus on the colon, lists, and the serial comma. This lesson opens with this Cultural Literacy worksheet on the grammatical concept of subordination, something, I think it’s fair to say, that anyone who needs to write well should know. Finally, here is the worksheet with comprehensive examples of the sentence structure under study.

Unlike most of the materials related to writing instruction you will find on this blog, this material is relatively unsupported. There are no modified cloze exercises (though, in reviewing this material, I understood how to go about preparing some, a maneuver that stymied me when I first contrived this unit), simply mentor sentences from the text from which I derived much of the material in this unit to guide students in composing sentences of their own.

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A Pair of Learning Supports on Ellipsis Points

As I mentioned in a post last week, a recent editing job caused me to develop some learning supports on punctuation; this week’s is a pair of learning supports on using ellipsis points. The text is drawn, as with the previous week’s post on using slashes, from June Casagrande’s The Best Punctuation Book, Period. (Berkeley: Ten Speed Press, 2014) and Susan Thurman’s The Only Grammar Book You’ll Ever Need (Avon, MA: Adams Media, 2003).

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A Pair of Learning Supports on Using Slashes and Backslashes

Recently, I edited a the fourth iteration of a privately published book that I have worked with on and off for about twenty-five years. In this most recent edition, I thought the author relied too heavily on slashes where he should have been using coordinating conjunctions. So, I prepared these two learning supports on using slashes and backslashes. These texts are drawn from June Casagrande’s The Best Punctuation Book, Period, (Berkeley: Ten Speed Press, 2014) and, from Susan Thurman’s book The Only Grammar Book You’ll Ever Need (Avon, MA: Adams Media, 2003).

Incidentally, the slash is also known as a virgule and solidus. But for our vernacular? Slash (in spite of its complicated polysemy) and backslash are the right words to describe these punctuation marks.

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Cultural Literacy: Quotation Marks

Moving right along this morning, here is a Cultural Literacy worksheet on quotation marks. This is a half-page worksheet with two comprehension questions and space to write practice sentences. Even in this short reading, the authors and editors manage to explain, simply, with an example, the single/double quotation mark rule in punctuation.

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A Learning Support on Gray Areas in Comma Use

Last but not least, here is a learning support on gray areas in comma use. This is the fifteenth of fifteen posts carrying learning supports–presented seriatim in the order, sorted by major subheadings, from the punctuation manual from which they are excerpted. If you click here, you will end up back at the first posted support, titled “An Introductory Learning Support on Using the Comma.” From there, you scroll up to find them in order. Each post indicates which is which in the sequence.

If you want it, here is the table of contents for all fifteen of the learning supports in this chain.

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A Learning Support on Comma Placement Relative to Other Punctuation

Here is a learning support on comma placement relative to other punctuation. This is the fourteenth of fifteenth learning supports, presented seriatim as they were presented in the punctuation manual from which they were excerpted. (You can find an excursus on this choice of publishing practice here.)

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