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The Weekly Text, 3 November 2023: Styling Sentences Lesson 15, Sentences with a Series of Lively Pairs

Today is the first Friday of Native American Heritage Month 2023 in the United States (Canada observes this month in June as National Indigenous History Month). I have materials to post, including a couple of Cultural Literacy worksheets today.

However, in order to keep them in a relatively tight series, this morning I post the fifteenth and final lesson plan of the Styling Sentences Unit, this one on sentences with a series of lively pairs. Nouns are one of the workhorses of the English language (along with verbs), and this lesson illustrates for students how solid, concrete nouns that appeal to the senses make prose come alive.

This lesson opens with this on parsing sentences to find conjunctions. This scaffolded and supported worksheet is the primary work of the lesson. Finally, here is a learning support in the form of a word bank to help students master this sentence form using pairs of lively nouns or noun phrases.

If you find typos in these documents, I would appreciate a notification. And, as always, if you find this material useful in your practice, I would be grateful to hear what you think of it. I seek your peer review.

The Weekly Text, 27 October 2023: Styling Sentences Lesson 14, Using the Serial Comma

Believe it or not, after all these weeks, we’re down to the penultimate lesson in the Styling Sentences Unit: ergo, this week’s Text is the fourteenth lesson plan in the series, this one on what strikes me as an important area of English usage and punctuation, using the serial comma.

This lesson opens with this worksheet on parsing sentences to find adjectives. Here is the scaffolded and supported worksheet that is the centerpiece of the lesson. Finally, here is a learning support on using the serial comma.

If you find typos in these documents, I would appreciate a notification. And, as always, if you find this material useful in your practice, I would be grateful to hear what you think of it. I seek your peer review.

The Weekly Text, 20 October 2023: Styling Sentences Lesson 13, The Compound Sentence with an Explanatory Statement

This week’s Text is the thirteenth lesson plan in the Styling Sentences Unit. This lesson deals with the compound sentence with an explanatory statement, with the two clauses separated by a colon. Like all of the lessons in this unit, about which, as I have prepared them for publication, I have unfortunately had many of my misgivings reinforced, this one aims to assist students in developing their own understanding of compound sentences, how to build them, and how to punctuate them.

This lesson opens with this worksheet on parsing sentences to find verbs. Here is the explanatory text with a learning support on the use of colons, the latter excerpted from Grant Barrett’s excellent manual Perfect English Grammar: The Indispensable Guide to Excellent Writing and Speaking (Berkeley: Zephyros Press, 2016). Finally, here is the scaffolded and supported worksheet that is the principal work of this lesson. There are mentor texts along with explanatory texts, so while the documents are relatively complete for this lesson, I still sense something is missing. Or is it that this lesson is just too much for the average high school student? I like to think not, but what do you think?

If you find typos in these documents, I would appreciate a notification. And, as always, if you find this material useful in your practice, I would be grateful to hear what you think of it. I seek your peer review.

The Weekly Text, 13 October 2023: Styling Sentences Lesson 12, The Compound Sentence with a Semicolon and No Conjunction

OK, your Weekly Text for today is the twelfth lesson plan of the Styling Sentences Unit, this one, as the headline reports, on writing a compound sentence separated with semicolon and no conjunction.

This lesson opens with this worksheet on parsing sentences to find prepositions. The principal work of this lesson for students, either independently or–preferably–in groups, is this scaffolded and supported worksheet. Unlike the work for every lesson from this unit posted so far, this worksheet straddles a line between highly supported work, i.e. sentence stems and cloze exercises, and the considerably less supported worksheets in this unit that call upon students to emulate often complicated mentor texts. Finally, here is a learning support on semicolons and their use in compound sentences.

If you find typos in these documents, I would appreciate a notification. And, as always, if you find this material useful in your practice, I would be grateful to hear what you think of it. I seek your peer review.

The Weekly Text, 6 October 2023: Styling Sentences Lesson 11, Paired Constructions

This week’s Text, you won’t be surprised to see or hear if you follow this blog, is the tenth lesson plan of the Styling Sentences Unit, this one on paired constructions.

I begin this lesson with this worksheet on parsing sentences for nouns. The centerpiece of this lesson is this worksheet with explanatory and mentor texts. Once again, I want to note that this document does not include any supported work in the way of sentence stems or cloze exercises. This particular sentence structure lends itself to that kind of support, and when next I use this material (if ever), I may well end up developing this work further in that direction.

If you find typos in these documents, I would appreciate a notification. And, as always, if you find this material useful in your practice, I would be grateful to hear what you think of it. I seek your peer review.

The Weekly Text, 29 September 2023: Styling Sentences Lesson 10, Prepositional Phrase before Subject/Verb

Here, as your Weekly Text, is the tenth lesson plan in the Styling Sentences Unit, this one on composing a sentence with a prepositional phrase before the subject and verb.

This lesson opens with this Cultural Literacy worksheet on the subject of a sentence. Subject is one of those tricky, polysemous words in English. As you know, the subject of a sentence is the noun or noun phrase that is doing something–which the verb describes–in a sentence. Students, in my experience, struggle with getting beyond the the meaning of the noun subject as a specific category of learning at school, e.g. maths, science, social studies, English language arts. All of this, I suppose, is an indirect plea for educating students in the many, and vital for understanding all sorts of things, uses of the word subject–it works as a noun, adjective, and verb in English. Finally, here is the worksheet with explanatory and mentor texts that constitutes the principal work of this lesson. Please note, once more, that this document contains no supported material such as sentence stems and cloze exercises, although I have some ideas about developing some. For this worksheet, students will work from mentor texts to develop sentences of their own in the form under review.

If you find typos in these documents, I would appreciate a notification. And, as always, if you find this material useful in your practice, I would be grateful to hear what you think of it. I seek your peer review.

The Weekly Text, 22 September 2023: Styling Sentences Lesson 9, A Single Modifier Out of Place for Emphasis

Here is the ninth lesson plan of the Styling Sentences Unit. This one, as heralded above, aims to assist students in writing a sentence with a single modifier out of place for emphasis.

I use this Cultural Literacy worksheet on the oxymoron as a rhetorical device as the opener for this lesson; this is half-page worksheet with a reading of one sentence that is two clauses separated by a colon. On one side of the colon is the explanation of oxymorons, on the other an example of an oxymoron in quotes. Finally, here is the worksheet with explanatory and mentor texts that is the work of this lesson. This is largely unsupported instruction: the worksheet presents only mentor texts, after which students will model their own sentences in this form. I’ve developed no sentence stems or cloze exercises for this material. If you do, could you let me know?

If you find typos in these documents, I would appreciate a notification. And, as always, if you find this material useful in your practice, I would be grateful to hear what you think of it. I seek your peer review.

The Weekly Text, 15 September 2023: Styling Sentences Lesson 8, Introductory or Concluding Participles

Today marks the beginning of Hispanic Heritage Month 2023, which continues to 15 October. With considerable chagrin, I now report that I have nothing substantial to post as Weekly Texts in observance this month: I understand (and this has a great deal to do with Hispanic students at my school reporting that they often feel unnoticed) that I need to develop more materials for my students and this blog. Last year, while developing and teaching a sociology course, I began a unit on the Zoot Suit Riots, a race riot in Los Angeles provoked by the Sleepy Lagoon murder and perpetrated by U.S. servicemen. I do have a sizeable inventory of short exercises–Cultural Literacy worksheets–that I can and will post during the month, as well as plenty of quotes to publish.

So, this week’s Text is the eighth lesson plan of the Styling Sentences Unit, this one on sentence forms featuring an introductory or concluding participle. This lesson opens with this Cultural Literacy worksheet on irregular verbs. Finally, here is the worksheet with explanatory and mentor texts that is the primary work of this lesson. Please take note that this document contains no supported content, i.e. no sentence stems or cloze exercises. Students use mentor texts to model their own sentences in this form.

If you find typos in these documents, I would appreciate a notification. And, as always, if you find this material useful in your practice, I would be grateful to hear what you think of it. I seek your peer review.

The Weekly Text, 8 September 2023: Styling Sentences Lesson 7, Emphatic Appositive at End, after a Colon

This week’s Text offers the seventh lesson plan in the Styling Sentences unit (and as I look at these lessons, one after another, as I post them, I am once again skeptical of their worth, as I was before I undertook a major revision and expansion of this unit during the COVID pandemic), this one, as heralded above, on a sentence form with an emphatic appositive at the end, after a colon.

This lesson opens with this worksheet on parsing sentences for nouns. The primary work of this lesson is this worksheet with explanatory and mentor texts. I want to point out, again, that this worksheet contains no sentence stems or cloze exercises, or really any kind of supportive apparatus. There are mentor texts for students to emulate. I think I could write some supported material for this worksheet, but I don’t know how useful it would be.

But what do you think?

If you find typos in these documents, I would appreciate a notification. And, as always, if you find this material useful in your practice, I would be grateful to hear what you think of it. I seek your peer review.

The Weekly Text, 1 September 2023: Styling Sentences Lesson 6, Repetition of a Key Term

This week’s Text is the sixth lesson plan of the Styling Sentences unit. This one deals, as headlined above, with the rhetorical device of the repetition of a key term.

This lesson opens with this Cultural Literacy worksheet on understatement. It’s a half-page worksheet with a reading of one-sentence reading–a longish compound with a colon separating the explanation of understatement with an example of its use. Finally, here is the worksheet with explanatory and mentor texts that stands as the principal work of this lesson. Nota bene, please, that as with most of the documents in this unit, this worksheet contains no sentence stems, cloze exercises, or other supporting apparatus. Students review mentor texts then set out to reproduce their structure by composing several sentences.

If you find typos in these documents, I would appreciate a notification. And, as always, if you find this material useful in your practice, I would be grateful to hear what you think of it. I seek your peer review.